Criticism Urgently Requested - Without the Urgency
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Topic: Criticism Urgently Requested - Without the Urgency
Posted By: The Niche
Subject: Criticism Urgently Requested - Without the Urgency
Date Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:10pm
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http://soundcloud.com/naoisemchugh/random-somewhat-metalish-lick" rel="nofollow - http://soundcloud.com/naoisemchugh/random-somewhat-metalish-lick Would someone be so kind as to feedback please? It's only a short one xD |
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Posted By: UMUR
Date Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:32pm
ehh...I�m not sure is long enough for me to really comment on  . Play it for a few bars more and develop a bit more on it. Maybe change the rythm after a couple of bars. I guess I can hear potential anyway .------------- http://www.lyngby-boldklub.dk/" rel="nofollow - Forever TRUE - Forever BLUE! https://rateyourmusic.com/~UMUR" rel="nofollow - UMUR on RYM |
Posted By: The Niche
Date Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 1:33pm
| Thanks, I'll get to that now :3 |
Posted By: vmoore
Date Posted: 10 Dec 2012 at 9:36am
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yeah way too short dude
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