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The Niche 
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 Topic: Criticism Urgently Requested - Without the UrgencyPosted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:10pm |
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http://soundcloud.com/naoisemchugh/random-somewhat-metalish-lick
Would someone be so kind as to feedback please? It's only a short one xD |
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UMUR
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Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 12:32pm |
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ehh...I�m not sure is long enough for me to really comment on
 . Play it for a few bars more and develop a bit more on it. Maybe change the rythm after a couple of bars. I guess I can hear potential anyway .
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The Niche
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Posted: 14 Sep 2012 at 1:33pm |
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Thanks, I'll get to that now :3
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Posted: 10 Dec 2012 at 9:36am |
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yeah way too short dude
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